My Passion is music, my love is a song, my heart is a rhythm.
31 Jul 2010
DATE OF BIRTH
I'm not a songwriter, so I might be completely wrong about this, but aren't your verses a little short compared to the chorus? Might just be me, but I think the verses could've been much longer. Other than that, great songwriting, you've captured the feeling all of us have sometimes very well. Keep it up!